When we went to a field trip to Mekarsari it was fun .
We plant a rice then we play mud fight. I would a appriciate to play mud fight with my friends.
When I saw the mud itmakes me digusting a lot. I saw Gian and Vanessa full of yucky mud.
The mud was slippery and smelly. I can't get up beacause it is so slippery. When I went up from the mud I fell to the mud again. My friends fell to the mud again too.
I push Ibu Shirley to the mud ang throw the mud to Ibu Shirley. I saw Ibu Shirley's face full of mud.
I went there 4 days ago.
So in there we play with our body full of mud that was smelly and dirty. I hold the mud and say and put on Vanessa. I said " you are so wonderful and beautiful.
That place was so dirty like a swimming pool that never be washed.
I am very cheerful when we are at the field trip.
When I touch it, it was so yuuuck.
It Was Fun!!!!!!!!!!!
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Natasha your score is...8/10 I think you need to check your spelling!
Your score will be 15\15 because you use many interesting words.............
Your score is 8/10 because of errors.
Tasha, your score will be 8/10. You have to remember how to spell the word
Hi Tasha,
Can you change your template to a light background colour? It will make it easier for us to read your posts.
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